ChatGPT and Teaching English

A bit over a week ago a colleague sent me an essay from The Atlantic that claimed we had reached the end of teaching high school English with the availability of ChatGPT. Coincidentally, I was teaching Ted Chiang’s brilliant story, “Truth of Fact, Truth of Feeling” which is about the adoption of technologies (one imaginary and one real) and what they do to us. I had queued up his story “Understand” (about hyper intelligence) to do next. So, on Thursday, December 15, my class and I opened ChatGPT and watched in real-time as it: retold Goodnight Mood in the style of Stephen King; retold the story of Arachne and Minerva as a country and western song; and as it wrote a brief essay comparing Malcolm X to world mythology.

Several of my colleagues were distraught over the article and a couple were aghast that I would show my class this since it certainly could address most of (if not all of) the writing prompts I have given for years. But, all apologies to the writer from The Atlantic, I don’t think we have reached the end of high school English. Ron Charles of The Washington Post also wrote about ChatGPT in his Book Club notes and lots of people are apocalyptically declaiming the end of op-eds and all sorts of things.

This past summer I read C. Thi Nguyen’s astonishing article “How Twitter Gamifies Communication” (and I am now about half-way through his book, Games: Agency as Art). I have long been interested in “gamifying” education for two reasons: 1) education and games share the idea of mastery through scaffolding; and 2) games are fun and education should be, at its best, about PLAY. Not “play” as frivolity–I am talking about the total absorption, loss of time, intensity of experience kind of play. But I am now thinking that I need to adjust my love of gamification–while retaining the best parts.

I say this because Ngyuen’s argument, which I am simplifying here, is that Twitter, with its “rankings” or “grading” through “likes” and “retweets;” through its “scoring” system changes the fundamental goals of communication into something different. Nguyen argues that the genius of games is to have us accept the rules of the game and that we adopt the values that the designer creates and then play within the game. By making communication a game, Twitter changes what we value.

But education has LONG been gamified. Schools, school systems, and too many teachers, impart the value proposition that you should chase the points or you should chase the grade. In fact, education is elaborately designed as a game but it is NOT necessarily knowledge or understanding or wisdom that is valued–it is the accumulation of points. (Now, most teachers will claim that is NOT what they are doing but then a look at a syllabus or course policy sheet or at their assessments will reveal that the points are the value. And parents and kids and administrators are all happy to agree.)

What if we adopted in our classes much more of an “apprenticeship model” and convinced people to chase knowledge or understanding–not the grade–to chase mastery and not points? We would be adopting what I have elsewhere called the Sherpa model ( the other two great roles for teachers being the Magician and the Stripper).

I am going to spend some time trying to work out how this looks in my classroom–and I am fortunate in that I have been doing so for the past few years anyway so I have something to start with. I don’t think we have reached the end of High School English; but maybe we have reached the end of teaching it in the way that, frankly, needed to end. I am optimistic–but I am also much closer to the end of my career than the beginning and so I could clearly be wrong about ChatGPT and whatever comes next.

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Catholic Education as Pilgrimage

Go as a Pilgrim

            There are whole shelves full of travel literature—odysseys, hegiras, journeys, travelogues, picaresques (or novels of the road), guide books for tourists and vacationers, and more specifically, “pilgrimage literature.” It nearly goes without saying that a reason for the enormous amount of non-fiction travel literature and the surfeit of fictional travels is that the metaphor of a journey for our movement through life is clear and well understood. It should be the model for Catholic education.

            Dante begins his great Commedia with the line, “Midway in our life’s journey…” thereby setting off on a great journey through hell, purgatory, and paradise.  Geoffrey Chaucer’s Canterbury Tales, with its 30 pilgrims heading to the Shrine of Thomas a Becket and swapping tales, is famous. But, the most popular book of the late 17th century, and the book that is thought to be the most translated English language book in the world, is one that is little known in contemporary America—it is Pilgrim’s Progress and is by a preacher, John Bunyan.  Though virtually unread today, parts of the book exist in vestigial fashion in our notion of the world as “vanity fair” which draws us away from higher pursuits (it is also the title of Thackeray’s great novel and of a popular magazine) and such phrases as “the slough of despond” and “the straight and narrow.” The book is an allegory about the trip of “Christian,” an every-person, from this world to the next.  The language is simple and plain, the events are easy to recount, and the journey is recognizable.  The book asks us to adopt the posture or role of pilgrim and that is what I am asking you to do. To go as a pilgrim is different from going as a vacationer, a tourist, or a business traveler.  When one goes as a pilgrim one is open to a spiritual transformation—a metanoia—and one goes on a pilgrimage expecting to be changed.

            An educational philosopher once observed that a good education teaches critical thinking, encourages service, and models excellence, but that a great education does all that and “touches the soul.” We should never settle for giving our students less than a great education—but the only way to do that is to go as a pilgrim ourselves—and to ask, cajole, and convince our students to go as pilgrims on their journey through life.

            There are other ways of undertaking the educational journey; the student vacationer is one who comes here expecting to be entertained—whose attitude towards the school assumes that the experience is ephemeral; vacations don’t last forever.  Anyone who has been on vacation with a teenager will recognize that the common complaint about the vacation is likely to echo the common complaint about school; “I’m bored.” There is a sense of just passing through as they head on—or back to—“real life.” The student vacationer may bring back mementos of the trip but is not fundamentally altered by it.

            The student business traveler is one who often takes school seriously but does not let it touch him profoundly.  He wants to get what he believes he needs from trip.  If he is interested in business or science or math he will often ask about Theology or literature or art—“Why do I have to take this?” I can often identify these students on their senior exit interviews where they are critical of anything we did that did not advance a personal cause of theirs. Perhaps the most common comment from this student is “Will this be on the test?” If something is not test-worthy, the reasoning goes, it is not worth knowing.

            The student tourist sees education as a journey to unfamiliar territory and depending on his attitude his approach can range from acquiescence (“I’m going because I’m expected to go here”) to a bemused tolerance (“you’re taking me to another museum?!”) to a sort of hostility (“you cannot make me go to another educational site”) to a sort of provincialism that borders on anti-intellectualism—characterized by the “I can’t believe that they use chopsticks here/drive on the left side of the road/eat [insert local cuisine]!”).

            On the teacher side of the desk you have the same kinds of travelers. The teacher vacationer is a rarity.  This person is not in teaching as a destination but as a way-station on their way somewhere else, he or she is slumming it while waiting for law school maybe.  The Onion did a funny piece one time on Teach for America participants as teacher vacationers. They imagined a kid writing in and complaining that he was part of someone’s narrative of how she helped poor minority kids on her way to her political career.  Some of those who move on from teaching really did think they were teachers and then they found out differently—but there are some who teach and immediately know that they are marking time until they go to “the real world.”

            The teacher business traveler is certainly more common than the vacationer.  But this person typically believes that he or she would do the same job in any school.  The context or mission of the school, its history and traditions make no difference because the teacher business traveler is only concerned about the transactional nature of teaching and—along a scale of poor to proficient—will do the job assigned. The teacher business traveler will often ask why we need to have assemblies or pep rallies, will question the value of community service (or praise it as long as it doesn’t affect homework), thinks that anything outside of his or her range of academic responsibility—sports, music, drama, social functions, development, etc., is a waste of time.

            The teacher tourist—or tour guide directs the student tours and is mildly concerned whether the tour group is pliable or hostile—he would prefer pliable—but  realizes he is getting paid whether the tour group has a good time or not, learns anything or not. The teacher tourist is often knowledgeable about the subject area he or she is presenting but that knowledge does not reflect a consuming passion with the subject but rather a view that is cool and expert. This kind of teacher almost functions as a docent in the museum of education.

            The pilgrim teacher travels with students and expects to be transformed in the process of leading the pilgrimage. She expects to take her students to a sacred space of biology or ethics or pre-calculus and she expects to help them adopt an attitude of reverence. No pilgrim teacher or pilgrim student expects the journey to be easy or smooth or obvious. What they do expect is that they will have a shared sense of purpose and openness to transformation. The pilgrim teacher realizes that many of the students may be vacationers, business travelers, or tourists—but that the goal is to help them become pilgrims.

            A pilgrimage usually has three-stages.  Part 1 is a “separation” from the current world—the start of the journey. On many pilgrimages this actually takes the form of adopting simple clothing that everyone on the pilgrimage will wear. The second part is called the “liminal stage” and involves the journey itself.  Part 3 is called “reaggregation” or the homecoming. Key to the pilgrimage experience is the bonding together with other pilgrims—having the shared experience with them. Significantly, a pilgrimage is an experience that provides a “temporary release from social [status] and a strong sense of … community or fellowship.” (Catholic Encyclopedia on “Pilgrimage”) Think of how well this fits with the academic enterprise as we hope to practice it in Catholic schools.  We separate students from the ordinary world (and we often dress them alike!); we accompany students on the journey itself; and we return to the world—whether at the end of each period, each semester, or each year, changed by the experience. On our journey, we put aside differences and focus on what we have in common.

            Alfred North Whitehead, the great British polymath, wrote a wonderful series of essays collected in The Aims of Education. He says there that “all education should be religious….  A religious education,” writes Whitehead “is an education which inculcates duty and reverence. Duty arises from our potential control over the course of events. Where attainable knowledge could have changed the issue, ignorance has the guilt of vice. And the foundation of reverence is this perception, that the present [moment] holds within itself the complete sum of existence, backwards and forwards, that whole amplitude of time, which is eternity.” We are fortunate in Catholic schools to have a clear mission that reminds us that we serve something larger than ourselves.

            Our students stay with us for a semester or a year—we often recognize that our pilgrimage with them is finite—but the gift of making them pilgrims is permanent. Ursula LeGuin, the terrific American fantasist, has numerous stories of travelers, and in one, she writes, “It’s important to have an end to journey to, but it’s the journey that matters, in the end.”

            Be a pilgrim, go as a pilgrim.  Take your students with you to sacred spaces and model for them reverence for your subject and the way it reveals the truth.  Be a pilgrim, go as a pilgrim.  Show your students that “A pilgrimage is a journey or search of moral or spiritual significance.” Do not let them settle for being vacationers, business travelers, or tourists.  Our goal is to adopt the attitude of pilgrims and accompany each other on a great journey to an encounter with the sacred.  If we do that, we will achieve the metanoia that separates the great education from the good.

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The Peterloo Massacre and American Democracy

In 1819 the government of England was teetering. George III was mentally incapacitated. The most pressing problem of the time was that of “rotten boroughs”; the original division of parliamentary representation no longer applied to a country that had experienced seismic demographic upheavals with urbanization, emigration, and an industrial revolution. There were places in England where almost no one lived that had votes in Parliament. This tyranny of the minority jeopardized the British government and in August of 1819 some 60,000 peaceful protesters in St. Peter’s Field in Manchester were attacked by a cavalry force. Somewhere between 10 and 15 people were killed and about 600 were injured.

The government took the opportunity to create more laws that repressed gatherings and the right to assembly.

This “tyranny of the minority” held until the reform laws of 1832 and subsequent to that.

While a tyranny of the majority is certainly evil (all tyranny is), it is not de facto worse than a tyranny of the minority. As Americans increasingly think about representation and proportionality it should be clear that, at some point, the people will demand fairer representation–and sadly the government is likely to respond first with force.

Those in power NEVER give it up willingly.

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My Ambivalence about the Hulk

As an student and admirer of genre fiction (not really a “fan” and certainly not a “scholar” of it) I went through a phase in adolescence of reading some comic books (not too different than the “Doc Savage” novels I loved). This was before the great revolution in comic books that has driven them further into a world that has required us to think of them differently and to describe them differently–as graphic novels.

I remember that The Hulk was also a television series starring Lou Ferrigno and Bill Bixby as the Hulk and David Banner respectively (I even remember the dispute about name David Banner, Bruce Banner, David Bruce Banner). What I admired about the comic book and the television series was Banner’s genuine fear that when he was the Hulk that he was out of control and that he might damage (or have damaged) innocent people when under the spell.

The idea that there is a force inside of us accessible in anger or inebriation) is ancient and common in literature (think of the struggle of the Apollonian order and the Dionysian chaos that exist in so much mythology and its internalization in battles between reason [it’s DOCTOR Banner after all] and emotion [ANGER drives the Hulk]).  Its exploration in Robert Louis Stevenson’s The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde adds interesting elements with the notion that Jekyll is “good” and Hyde is “evil” is not something that really exists in the mythological binary. By the time one gets to Psycho the being inside of Norman Bates (Mother) is not really a good/evil struggle, it is one of sickness/health. The line from doppelgangers (exterior foils), drunks, Jekyll and Hyde, Norman and mother, to the Hulk and “possession stories” of all kinds (including The Exorcist and its progeny) is pretty clear.

The Hulk is now most familiar as a member of the Avengers and the graphical representations of him are jaw-droppingly spectacular. But, I am afraid that he is now merely a giant, indestructible hero. I have rarely been so angry that I was out of control–but I recognize the emotion and when it takes you over it may give you the strength or courage to do something you might not otherwise do–but innocent people can be hurt and your sense of “proportional response” is eradicated. I admired that sense that used to exits that you really DO NOT want to turn the Hulk loose–now we want the Hulk and his atavistic power sanitized from the possible “collateral damage” he might cause. Something has been lost in this change–it has made the Hulk more brittle, less scary, not quite as interesting–and not as human as he once was.

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The Tao of Learning: Assent, Skepticism, and the Ways We Learn

The Tao of Learning: Assent, Skepticism, and the Ways We Learn

I would like for us to think about two distinct ways of learning, which turn out to be two ways of knowing, and two ways of being. I am going to shorthand these two ways of knowing as “skepticism” and “assent” though I will use synonyms for both as I elaborate. The relationship between these two ways should be seen as reciprocal or dialogic or complementary—much like the yin and yang. Often when people are asked to draw the symbol of yin and yang they mistakenly color the one side in completely and leave the other empty—but the symbol’s power comes not just from the beauty of the circle bisected by a sine curve—but because in each half “the other” is represented. In the yin, the dark half, there is a light “eye” and in the light half, the yang, there is a dark “eye”.

One of the great gifts of the Enlightenment, perhaps the singular gift of the Enlightenment, is the gift of skepticism. The residue of the Enlightenment, the skeptical approach, has proven to be a tremendous tool to advance learning. In fact, one might argue that knowledge only exists with skepticism.

There are limits to perpetual skepticism, however. Descartes and his descendants ran into problems with radical doubt and Stephen Toulmin analyzes the failure of radical doubt in his book Cosmopolis. The philosopher Wayne Booth studied this radical skepticism as it appears in all forms of contemporary life and even identified what he helpfully calls “motivism.” Motivism states that people’s actions and their reasoning are not the product of their free will but rather of motives—often concealed even from themselves—and that those motives, being “unclean” de facto render their actions and opinions wrong and self-serving. Think of our political discourse filled as it is with statements beginning with, “The only reason that Senator X says this is….” Or, “The real reason that the President wants to do such and such is….” Motivism attacks the idea that there can be any verifiable actions or policies or ideas—and in some cases even facts—except, of course, one’s own. If someone’s motives can be questioned, and whose motives can withstand the inquiry of absolute doubt, then all of that person’s subsequent ideas and actions can be dismissed as self-interested. Booth’s intricate and demanding book-length argument, Modern Dogma and the Rhetoric of Assent, fleshes out a series of lectures he gave at the University of Notre Dame where he demonstrates that contemporary life is far more comfortable with skepticism or doubt, often to the point of fetishizing it as, ironically, its own religion with its own dogma. It is clearly the predominate mode of intellectual inquiry in contemporary culture. In an age where despite a rampant publication of the self we are terrified of looking “duped” or “credulous” (“punked” in the vernacular) and where “belief” (in all sorts of areas) is held to be indefensible and merely a reflection of a weak mind and/or personal preference, skepticism and its close cousin, irony, are ascendant. One thinks of Richard Dawkins or Christopher Hitchens or Sam Harris or those I think of as “evangelical atheists” who are as certain in their view as any religious fundamentalist.

To change one’s mind with shifting evidence is also regarded as a catastrophe to be avoided as one would avoid drinking raw sewage. This, of course, denies the possibility of growth, but that apparently matters little to those wanting to play “gotcha” or those terrified of “flip-flopping.”

This adoption of skepticism and irony is reflected not just in the sciences but in the arts. David Foster Wallace traced this notion to its logical conclusion and said: “Postmodern irony and cynicism has become an end in itself, a measure of hip sophistication and literary savvy. Few artists dare to try to talk about ways of working toward redeeming what’s wrong, because they’ll look sentimental and naive to all the weary ironists. Irony’s gone from liberating to enslaving.”

In fact, if I am honest with myself I will recognize that I have been guilty of exactly this and I need to be on guard against it—to teach myself to be careful of the seduction of skepticism.

Still, motivism is an extreme application of skepticism (hence the separate name). Which of us has not benefitted from doubting ourselves at some point—or from questioning others or received opinion? Indeed, little progress would be made if each generation merely genuflected at the altar of the previous generation. And this is the danger of “assent”—or really of blind assent. Though I’d say most people’s problems with systematic assent are related to psychological defense or fear—a fear of being taken advantage of—rather than a more reasoned response, but I could be wrong. Following Booth’s argument, we might point out that those devoted to skepticism as their tool for developing knowledge and learning about the world have assented to its primacy over all other methods—so is assent prior to skepticism and equally important to knowledge? I don’t know which is prior—that strikes me as something of a chicken-and-egg argument—but I cannot conceive of the advance of knowledge without both.

But to demonstrate that I will need to move away from Wayne Booth; I will need to appeal to a different contemporary philosopher, Tina Fey. You may know Fey as a wonderful comic and female outsider in a predominantly male genre; I’d say that her autobiography, Bossypants, is filled—as much comedy is—with philosophical insights delivered with a candy-coating. In a framed set-piece she asks us to consider that adopting the rules of improvisation that will change our lives (and eliminate “bellyfat,” though she acknowledges that part needs more investigation). Here are the rules of improv: 1) Always Agree and Say Yes; 2) Say “Yes, AND”; 3) Make Statements; and 4) There are no mistakes, only opportunities. So, how does this work in real life? Here is how Fey demonstrates rule 1, Agree and Say Yes. If I say, “’Freeze, I have a gun,’ and you say ‘That’s not a gun. It’s your finger,’ our improvised scene has ground to a halt. But if I say ‘Freeze, I have a gun!’ and you say, ‘The gun I gave you for Christmas!’ then we have started a scene because we have AGREED that my finger is in fact a Christmas gun.” What this rule teaches us, Fey points out, is to “respect what your partner has created.” Since teaching is relational—we gather with our students around the subject to be taught and journey together—and being a colleague is also relational—this is a good rule to know and to master. Respect what your student has created; respect what your colleague has created. (This does not prohibit us from later on going back and applying our skepticism to this first assertion that your finger is a gun; but if we applied the rule of skepticism first, we would not discover—or create—the next idea.)

Fey explains rule 2, “Yes, AND” in the following way, “If I start a scene with ‘I can’t believe it’s so hot in here,’ and you just say ‘Yeah…’ then we’re at a standstill. [but, if you follow on with] ‘What did you expect, we’re in hell,’ [or] ‘Yes, this can’t be good for the wax figures,’ [or] ‘I told you we shouldn’t have crawled into this dog’s mouth,’ now we’re getting somewhere.” If the lesson to Rule 1, AGREE, is to “respect what your partner has created,” then the lesson to rule 2, Yes, AND, is that we each have a responsibility to contribute—it is OUR relationship. It is our relationship with our students or colleagues—not just their relationship.

The third rule is MAKE STATEMENTS. “This,” as Fey explains, “is a positive way of saying ‘Don’t ask questions all the time.’ If we’re in a scene and I say, ‘Who are you? Where are we? What are we doing here? What’s in that box?’ I am putting pressure on you to come up with all the answers. “In other words: Whatever the problem is, be part of the solution. Don’t just sit around raising questions and pointing out obstacles. We’ve all worked with that person. That person is a drag,” Fey concludes.

I agree; that person is a drag. I have been that person. Perhaps when we approach our students or colleagues with criticism—and I am assuming the criticism is legitimate since why would be criticizing otherwise?—maybe we could approach them by saying, “It looks like you are having trouble getting your homework done. How do you think we might address that?”

The lesson to MAKE STATEMENTS is “be part of the solution, be active, not passive.”

The last rule is THERE ARE NO MISTAKES, only opportunities. As a veteran teacher I can tell you that I have graded many tests, quizzes, papers and projects FILLED with “opportunities” and often “opportunities” I really wish that I could ignore. But my students and I have often learned from the “opportunities.” If many students keep making “opportunities” then maybe I am not teaching what I think I am teaching.

A classroom, even when tightly scripted, (and all classes should be scripted), is a place of improvisation because the student doesn’t know the script. Fey concludes her piece on improvisation by pointing out that improv is a road to discovery. All learning is discovery, and we can discover as much by assenting as by doubting. Let’s think about the four rules and their lessons: AGREE and SAY YES so that we respect what our partner has created; SAY YES, AND so that we honor our responsibility to contribute; MAKE STATEMENTS so we remind ourselves to be part of the solution; and THERE ARE NO MISTAKES so that we teach ourselves to see opportunities.

Among Greg Boyle’s remarkable gifts in Tattoos on the Heart: his resiliency, his optimism, his hope, his practicality, his honesty, and his pain; perhaps the one I appreciate most is his gift to “stand with” the other. To empathize, not sympathize and not pity, but to stand with another. “Leon Dufour,” writes Boyle, “a world-renowned Jesuit theologian and Scripture scholar, a year before he died at ninety-nine, confided in a Jesuit who was caring for him, ‘I have written so many books on God, but after all that, what do I really know? I think, in the end, God is the person you’re talking to, the one right in front of you.” How Trinitarian that concept is. The Gospel of the Trinitarians is the one that tells us the parable of the saved and the damned. The saved fed Jesus when hungry, clothed him when naked, visited him in prison, gave him drink when thirsty and comforted him when ill. The saved are unable to remember having done this. So Jesus tells them that whenever they did it for the least of his brothers, they did it for him. They “stood with” the others. The damned did not; in fact they want a do-over. “God,” they say, “if we knew it was you of course we would have behaved better!”
This ability to truly see others, to—by an act of the imagination—place yourself with them, is a form of assent. If skepticism functions as a distancing tool (like irony or doubt), we use assent as a kind of embrace—an intellectual embrace that brings us to stand with the idea of a partner (or critic). Boyle quotes the poet Wendell Berry who says that, “You have to be able to imagine lives that are not yours.” I suspect this is because that willed imaginative empathy is a distinctly human quality. I doubt anyone is fully human until she can put herself in the place of another. Edith Stein, the Carmelite nun and Jew, who was executed in Auschwitz, argued, and I am paraphrasing Garry Wills here, that we achieve our own interiority, our soul, our self, only by the interplay with other interiorities. I explore other persons like me and different from me, and define a self in the process—so that the isolated person is a non-person. Even our God is not an isolated God but one who exists in relationship with a Self. Moral progress, Stein argues, is a matter of making a self that pays its debts to the other selves that helped it come into being. To break off or diminish that respectful interplay with other minds is morally to die. And really, how dare we ignore the debts we owe each other? Respect what the partner has created; remember your obligation to participate, be part of the solution, see opportunities where others see failure.

How do we learn the interplay with other interiorities? How do we teach that? Is assent or skepticism more likely to lead us to that goal? It seems to me that you will be more likely to inhabit someone else’s point of view in an act of assent. Even if you later reject that point of view, having had it is a remarkable tool for growth. I would say we are more likely to recognize that interplay with others in assent than in skepticism, we are more likely to pay our debts to others in assent than in skepticism.
At DeMatha, we strive to provide an education that is both timeless and timely. If we educate only for the timely we will be forever chasing the new, trying to harness the fleeting. But what if we “stand with” our students, “stand with” our colleagues, practice assent as well as doubt. What if we teach them timeless values and ideas and approaches and make use of timely discoveries and technology. I’d like us to try so that we will have educated the whole person.

Ordinarily I would end at this point but I want to append what the Japanese call an atogaki. The literal translation of atogaki is “afterword” or “postscript” but it means quite a bit more. A Japanese author of a nonfiction book or article will often in the atogaki provide a guide for how to critique his or her work. As the builder of the argument, the author knows where more spackle and tape and paint have gone in to making the argument appear cleaner and smoother than it really is. A Japanese atogaki will often contain phrases such as, “Had I further time to develop my thesis I would have done the following,” or “The evidence is weakest at this point and I would like to pursue further corroboration.” How typically Japanese this seems to me. So, here is a partial atogaki of this talk. I have been hesitant to give this talk for many reasons: the first is that I find the concepts herein are demanding and the philosophy difficult and I fear my own examples and explanations may be inadequate and so I risk losing some people; 2) I do not want to be misunderstood as arguing for either one of these two ways of knowing above the other—neither is “better” than the other in every situation; 3) I do not want people to think that I am after a kind of special pleading that demands acquiescence given my position as principal and my interest in defending “knowing through assenting.” That is, I don’t want to be heard as asking for people to agree with me on every decision or approach or action. One of the most important gifts we can have in life are the people who will force us to articulate as clearly as we can what we do and why we do it, who will encourage us to face our limitations—to battle those—and often that happens in the realm of skepticism (not motivism but genuine skepticism) though I believe it can also happen in assent; 4) I know I missed several opportunities to make closer connections; for example I ignored Wallace’s use of the word “redeemed”—a distinctly religious word—and I didn’t make anything out of his pairing of “liberating and enslaving”—those words which echo our Trinitarian charism; and 5) I am pretty sure that I did not really pave the way for the transition that explains how assent as illustrated through improv connects to Boyle’s call to “stand with” the other—though I sense it exists. Doubtless there are many other lacunae large and small but these seem to me the most pressing.

I hope we’ll have a great year, that we’ll stand with kids and stand with families and stand with colleagues, that we will doubt and assent, that we will discover—both knowledge and wisdom, both ourselves and others. Welcome to the 2014-2015 school year.

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Baccalaureate 2014: The Art of Remembering

I know a high school graduate who got cut from the baseball team twice—despite practicing inordinately hard for a whole year, giving up his part-time job to run and throw on a daily basis. This graduate also, during his high school years, got dumped by his first girlfriend, got D’s in classes, flunked an occasional test, got in trouble with his parents for not working hard, was not allowed to get his driver’s license because his grades were bad and he had at least a couple of teachers that he thought were incompetent—maybe they were.

So, I imagine that you think you would not have to ask this student what his high school and high school years were like. Well, I am glad you asked me anyway. Because even though all that first part is true about my own experiences, so is this—I got to play on a terrific soccer team, I met friends who I still have, I had many teachers that I admired and one or two whose influence on me I still feel. I also was witness to people with a work ethic I admired extravagantly, a school whose mission was inclusive and generous, and a way of living—not a lifestyle—that I could admire and emulate, however imperfectly.

A lifestyle reflects your choice in clothes, car, hair, entertainment options, and the like. A way of life reflects you core principles—your commitment to you family and friends. Your awareness of those less fortunate and your willingness to side with them. Your pride in being a person of your word in a world that thinks little of breaking contracts. I hope that at DeMatha your have learned the value of a way of life and not a lifestyle.

My particular thanks to the parents and all those who have made your education possible. They have invested in you and your future in ways that show the profound depth of their love for you. When you love someone you are concerned about their long-term well-being, not necessarily their immediate desires. This is why parents have their children inoculated against diseases. Even though the shot hurts momentarily, the long term effects can be life-saving. It is distinctly human to plan for the future; we make pulleys and promises based on our knowledge and belief in cause and effect. Your parents have sacrificed to try to give you an opportunity that will last you the rest of your life. Education is forever, an inoculation against ignorance, bigotry, small-mindedness and short-sightedness; and a religious education is forever and beyond—that’s real concern about someone’s long term well-being. You can never pay your parents back—except by doing for your own children and the children of others what has been done for you.

As you tell the story of your high school career you can focus on whatever parts of it you want to and you can make that experience whatever you want. I encourage you to make it one that reflects the best in you, one that shows you not as a victim of circumstances to whom things happened but as an agent of your own education, as the author of your own life. It’s not that I don’t remember the bad grades or getting cut or any of the other things. But I remember my responsibility and the love of my parents who sacrificed for and invested in me.

To the class of 2014: I will always be grateful for the part you have played in helping form me and in helping form DeMatha. I will be so proud to call you fellow alums this Friday.

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10 Minute Mini-Lesson: Logic and Lyrics, Rhyme and Rhetoric

Here is an assignment I did with my students today that came to me based on a song I heard while I was at the gym. It was great fun and just what we needed as a brief break. I teach all boys, juniors, and this might not be appropriate for all levels (but the idea of taking something and carving it up for students to put back together would still be valid). I am always interested in logic, inferences, rhetorical skills and reasoning–and this has it all. NEVER let anyone talk you out of having FUN in class (a common temptation because then you aren’t “serious” enough).

I gave the students the following set up: What follows are the lyrics to a song. You need to make 4 lines of either 6 or seven syllables. Each line will begin, “I make a…” and then you will pick one from column A and one from column B. You’ll need to account for rhyme (where should the rhyme go?) and though there are several ways to put this together, there is really only one “best” way.

Column A                                                                          Column B

1. Rich Woman                                                               A. Blush

2. Young Girl                                                                   B. Steal

3. Old Woman                                                                 C. Squeal

4. Good Woman                                                             D. Beg

 

The clue that I gave them was that three from column A “violate” our expectation of them and one does what is “expected.” You could, of course tell them it is two lines of hexameter (or a 12 syllable and a 13 syllable line that rhyme). But you still have to get things in the correct order. The most common “mistake” my students made was assigning the Rich Woman to Steal. That makes sense of course but does not leave a particularly good answer for the Good Woman. If you gave the Good Woman “blush” then the Old Woman would be left with either “Beg” or “Squeal”–neither of which is as satisfactory as the best way.  Here is the way that George Thorogood (“Bad to the Bone”) frames it and I’ll say a few words about thinking through the “best” organization”

I make a Rich Woman Beg,

I make a Good Woman Steal,

I make an Old Woman Blush

I make a Young Girl Squeal.

Why is this better than, say switching lines 2 and 4 or 1 and 3. You would preserve the rhyme and cadence in either case. But look carefully, this way allows the parallel construction of the old/young to be paired and both the other ways separate them. (This also goes back to flawed way of doing it from above where if the Rich Woman Steals then the Old Woman/Young Woman pairing is not as strong.) In addition, this way builds from the first three lines of the women acting counter to their nature or experience and closing with the one that A) is not a woman but a girl and B) acts as we might expect.

I was so impressed with my students as they wrestled around through some mistakes–all got the rhyme though some began with a couplet–but that wouldn’t really make the best way to sing it, now would it. In any event, we had a great time–and perhaps the unintended benefit was that the rest of the class (Chapter 23 of Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man) was awesome.

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W.B. Yeats’ “The Folly of Being Comforted”: A Poem for St. Patrick’s Day

The Irish poet William Butler Yeats is perhaps the greatest English language poet of the 20th century—if he is not in a class by himself, then the class he is in doesn’t take long to call roll.

I present here two versions of Yeats’ “The Folly of Being Comforted.” Yeats was an inveterate reviser of his works and this one benefited substantially from his relentless tinkering. We’ll be spending time with the one on the right but I thought you might get a kick out of seeing the earlier version. Yeats is a terrific example of the kind of artist who drills so deeply into the personal that he discovers the universal. His life-long love of the great Irish beauty and revolutionary Maud Gonne is well known. Too often, though, biographers, critics and readers spend endless amount of time trying to tie every one of Yeats’ poems to some biographical element of his life. But autobiography isn’t poetry and “The Folly of Being Comforted” is poetry. You’ll find in the right margin that I have applied rhyme scheme—designated by capital letters—and a syllable count for each line in parentheses. We can quibble about the syllable count in line 4 of both versions depending on how we pronounce “easier” with two syllables /ez-yer/ or three syllables /e-z-er/. An iambic foot has two syllables and the way you end up with some 11 syllable lines is usually through the use of substitute, 3-syllable feet.

This is a sonnet—but not a traditional one—and Yeats, like a gymnast using the entire mat space in a floor routine, shows amazing creativity inside the rigorous confines of the sonnet form: 14 lines, rhymed, iambic pentameter. Often sonnets will have an octave (8-line segment) and a sestet (6-line segment) or three quatrains (4-line units) and a couplet (2-line wrap-up). Yeats rejects both of those patterns and rearranged the poem on the page in the second version so that line 6 is broken in two—to emphasize the pause and change in speakers; and he separated the last two lines to reinforce the pause and again allow the change in voice to settle in.
Take a read through the 1933 version of the poem (which is below the first version of 1902; you will need to click on the link which I had to do this way to retain the formatting–critical to reading and appreciating this poem):

“The Folly of Being Comforted” (1902)

ONE that is ever kind said yesterday: A (10)
“Your well beloved’s hair has threads of grey, A (10)
And little shadows come about her eyes; B (10)
Time can but make it easier to be wise, B (11)
Though now it’s hard, till trouble is at an end; C (11)
And so be patient, be wise and patient, friend.” C (11)
But heart, there is no comfort, not a grain; D (10)
Time can but make her beauty over again, D (11)
Because of that great nobleness of hers; E (10)
The fire that stirs about her, when she stirs E (10)
Burns but more clearly. O she had not these ways, F (11)
When all the wild Summer was in her gaze. F (10)
O heart! O heart! if she’d but turn her head, G (10)
You’d know the folly of being comforted. G (11)

 

The Folly of Being Comforted

 

One that is ever kind said yesterday:
`Your well-belovéd's hair has threads of grey,
And little shadows come about her eyes;
Time can but make it easier to be wise
Though now it seems impossible, and so
All that you need is patience.'
                             Heart cries, `No,
I have not a crumb of comfort, not a grain.
Time can but make her beauty over again:
Because of that great nobleness of hers
The fire that stirs about her, when she stirs,
Burns but more clearly. O she had not these ways
When all the wild summer was in her gaze.

O heart! O heart! If she'd but turn her head,
You'd know the folly of being comforted.

 

Yeats gets three voices into this brief poem—the long-time friend (the one who is “ever kind” gets lines 2 through the first 7-syllables of line 6 or 48 of the 145 syllables [33%]), the narrator (line 1, syllables 8 and 9 of line 6, and lines 13 and 14 or 31 total syllables [21%]), and the narrator’s heart (last syllable of line 6 through line 12 who gets 64 syllables [44%]). The friend comforts the narrator with a version of the “time heals all wounds” argument. As a syllogism it might read: You fall in love with what is beautiful; your beloved gets older, her hair gets gray, the laugh lines appear; she won’t be as beautiful and so you won’t be so sad.

But look at line 6, a 7-syllable conclusion to the friend’s encouragement and a 3-syllable shift to a new speaker—the narrator’s heart, thereby giving us the 10-syllable line and the proper rhyme of /No/ with /so/. The heart of the narrator “cries” and cries out—“No.” That anguish is extraordinary—the friend’s wisdom is rejected because Time makes her beautiful over and over again with every season of her life. We realize that the narrator never loved her just for her physical beauty but instead he loved her for that “great nobleness” of character and the passion—“the fire that stirs about her”—that she brings to life. Her beauty grows ever greater because it is a mature beauty that has eclipsed the beauty of her youth—“she had not these ways” when she was in the spring of life and the summer and fall of life stretched out before her. Love is not something that can be “reasoned” away or that yields to time—and that is a powerful idea.

There is lots of wonderful sound to the poem but I’d like to point out a tension that Yeats creates that serves the poem well. The use of couplet rhyme usually means that every line has an end-stop. Consider the following:

“Order is Heav’n’s first law; and this confest,
Some are, and must be, greater than the rest.
Or
“Know then thyself, presume not God to scan;
The proper study of Mankind is Man.”
Or
“A little learning is a dang’rous Thing;
Drink deep, or taste not the Pierian Spring.”
Or
“True Wit is Nature to Advantage drest,
What oft was Thought, but ne’er so well Exprest.”

All of those couplets are from Alexander Pope. But Yeats creates tension by pitting the couplet rhyme with its end-stops against the use of enjambment—the lack of punctuation that causes one to read through the rhyme to the next line. Lines 4 to 5, 9 to 10, and 11 to 12 all mute the impact of the rhyme giving a conversational tone to a highly constructed form. The break in 6 suspends the rhyme of “so” and “No” to again mute it. So read and listen to the poem one more time, note the change in layout from 1902 to 1933 that helps Yeats reinforce his sense of pace; and let’s think about the movement of time, the true nature of beauty, and the permanence of love.

The Folly of Being Comforted

One that is ever kind said yesterday:
`Your well-belovéd's hair has threads of grey,
And little shadows come about her eyes;
Time can but make it easier to be wise
Though now it seems impossible, and so
All that you need is patience.'
                             Heart cries, `No,
I have not a crumb of comfort, not a grain.
Time can but make her beauty over again:
Because of that great nobleness of hers
The fire that stirs about her, when she stirs,
Burns but more clearly. O she had not these ways
When all the wild summer was in her gaze.

O heart! O heart! If she'd but turn her head,
You'd know the folly of being comforted.

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A Teacher’s Diary: Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man Chapter 14, The Chthonian

I am keeping a “teacher’s diary” of Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man. Each video is under 5 minutes and serves as a review of the chapter as well as introducing a few of the numberless ways of thinking about this masterwork. All 25 chapters get a video as do the Prologue, the Epilogue, a couple of critical approaches, and there is a pre-reading video.

https://present.me/view/143904-invisible-man-14-the-chthonian

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A Teacher’s Diary: Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man 17 Clifton, Ras and the Fight Under the Streetlamp

I am keeping a “teacher’s diary” of Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man. Each video is under 5 minutes and serves as a review of the chapter as well as introducing a few of the numberless ways of thinking about this masterwork. All 25 chapters get a video as do the Prologue, the Epilogue, a couple of critical approaches, and there is a pre-reading video.

https://present.me/view/147736-im-17-clifton-ras-broken-streetlig

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